Chapter 4, Page 23 Rough

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Is it still considered ’spontaneous combustion’ if you’re just really, really upset?

Chapter 4, Page 22 Rough

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Oh man, so much is crammed into this chapter! Hopefully these rough pages will help me sort out pacing issues for the final version. I really appreciate all the feedback and suggestions on these so far.

Chapter 4, Page 21 Rough

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Esten helps Biali escape from the returning soldiers. And don’t worry, it’s not a very sharp sword, it’s the heavy ceremonial type.

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Biali inadvertently fixes the poor bear’s curse.

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The bear with sideburns makes his return!